A short read with a zesty athiest twist

[Tarks]

Hey, I'm deciding whether if it's worth pursuing an idea for an extended piece of writing, as the people here fall under my target audience I'd like to get some random, almost anonymous feedback before I take it any further.

http://www.tarks.qsh.eu/Madamadadane.pdf

My main question is does this sound like something you'd like to read more of? I know the packing is jolty and the tonality is a little imposing, those are things I have no trouble refining, please try and look past that and critique the content and it's potential.

Is it even in the ball park of useful?

Any feedback would be appreciated.

[Jolly Sapper]

hmm...

Not a bad read.  Very upbeat and positive, I dig it.