About last night (A Haiku)

[No one]

Terrified screaming.
As I see you nekkid ass.
Bleach my memory.

[Tank]

First line
Second line
WTF is Haiku

[No one]

First five syllables
Then it's seven syllables
Then it's five again

Like this:

Subterranean
Histomorphological
Choreographer

[MarcusA]

A very good haiku, No one, but punctuation is not your strength.  Without punctuation, you might be mistaken for an artist.

[MarcusA]

My black hole
As the Abos say -
An artist newborn

[MarcusA]

All this talk of assholes would make you think that we were talking about God and the Devil.

[MarcusA]

about last night,
I couldn't sleep because
you weren't there.

[MarcusA]

Haiku's done five-seven-five
or otherwise.

[MarcusA]

No one, I just can't get over how good that first poem of yours is.

[MarcusA]

I will promote your poem, No one, until someone else replies.

[MarcusA]

They keep demoting you, and I will continue promoting you.

[MarcusA]

Haiku is not musical,
it is magical.

[MarcusA]

Senryu is haiku,
but haiku is not senryu -
it makes sense really.

[MarcusA]

There is virtually no rules
in haiku. You cannot go
too far astray.

[MarcusA]

alone - dero, bum