A Short Horror Story

[Kylyssa]

The following is a short horror story I just wrote.  In it a creature far from home tries to survive in a human city.  It's very personal.  

The Monster

[joeactor]

I won't spoil it for the others, but at the end it was scary for a completely different reason...

Well done,
JoeActor

[curiosityandthecat]

*clap* Brava. Brava.

[susangail]

Wow. This is one of those where you stare at the screen for a good 30 seconds after you finish it, thinking holy shit. (at least that's what I did) *claps hands* Good job.

[MommaSquid]

Disturbing.  Well done, Kylyssa.

[tornado]

Very well written. Good job.

[Samdango]

Sad, but I liked it.  Thanks for sharing.

[Mister Joy]

Ingenious! The ending is totally unexpected.

[afreethinker30]

The story leaves you feeling sick at the end.You my friend are a great writer.

[Kylyssa]

Thank you all for reading and boosting my self-esteem.

If you'd like a bit of a giggle, scroll down to read the only comment on the page.  I am followed everywhere by people trying to convince me of god's existence.  I also get lots of random private messages from people trying to show me the "error of my ways" with "proofs" of god's reality.

[afreethinker30]

Thank you all for reading and boosting my self-esteem.

If you'd like a bit of a giggle, scroll down to read the only comment on the page.  I am followed everywhere by people trying to convince me of god's existence.  I also get lots of random private messages from people trying to show me the "error of my ways" with "proofs" of god's reality.

It's a shame people can't just let others alone about their beliefs.But who cares about those people right.They can preach all they want but at the end of the day they are all just the same as everyone else.

[OldGit]

The story is first-class. The comment shows that you were casting your pearls before swine.  (Did I steal that from somewhere?)