I have just finished your book and written a review. It was sweet and well written, you did a good job, I was half expecting it to be a bit more.... amateur. But you have good style. My main complaint is editing. I get very distracted by little grammar mistakes or misspellings in published materials, so before you do your second print, please edit! But overall, good job! Now I'm going to give it to someone and tell them to read it and do a review also!
Thanks, Dragonia. Are you the reviewer, Delven? I'm assuming that's you since it's the newest one. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Glad to see I'm maintaining my 4.5 out of 5 stars average. I need more reviews and more exposure though so, please, tell your friends and family to check it out. Maybe a Facebook post with a link?
I know I'm shilling but self-promotion is mandatory for authors.
Re: various grammar or spelling typos - I edited it numerous times and I'm not aware of any remaining typos. Still, I'll give it the once over again. It's easy to miss things in a large document after looking at it so many times. You just sort of zone out.
Thanks so much for your feedback. Greatly appreciated.