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Re: Haiku Thread
« on: December 28, 2014, 04:25:46 AM »
Sokka's Haiku Battle I loved The Avatar cartoon.

My submission:

The hound is here now
Greedily chewing his bone
Not to be disturbed
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Re: Haiku Thread
« Reply #1 on: December 28, 2014, 04:37:07 AM »
How to the salt mine
for me to them directly
then we have nothing

My phone spit that one out. Weird.
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Re: Haiku Thread
« Reply #2 on: December 28, 2014, 04:39:59 AM »
Quote from: jumbojak on December 28, 2014, 04:37:07 AM
How to the salt mine
for me to them directly
then we have nothing

My phone spit that one out. Weird.

I think your haiku was rather good. This one is more of a senryū, in my opinion.
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Re: Haiku Thread
« Reply #3 on: December 28, 2014, 10:10:36 AM »
First a random five
Scrape the barrel for seven
Then dig up five more.

Jeez, but it's boring.  Nearly as mind-numbing as tennis.
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Re: Haiku Thread
« Reply #4 on: December 28, 2014, 03:17:15 PM »
Quote from: Recusant on December 28, 2014, 04:39:59 AM
This one is more of a senryū, in my opinion.

Interesting. I'd never heard of a senryu before.

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In my pocket it sits now
Yet it gets it wrong
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Re: Haiku Thread
« Reply #5 on: December 28, 2014, 03:20:21 PM »
Quote from: OldGit on December 28, 2014, 10:10:36 AM
Jeez, but it's boring.  Nearly as mind-numbing as tennis.

I don't know about that OG. Having played tennis for many years I can't think of anything more stultifying!

Hit the ball across
Watch it sail over the net
Rinse lather repeat
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Re: Haiku Thread
« Reply #6 on: December 28, 2014, 03:28:50 PM »
I'll give it a try.

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Re: Haiku Thread
« Reply #7 on: December 28, 2014, 04:12:36 PM »
Sneakers change their name
To hock their shit every day
Fernanda never plays
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Re: Haiku Thread
« Reply #8 on: December 28, 2014, 04:19:29 PM »
The Asmo, He has the perfect haiku in His siggie.

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Re: Haiku Thread
« Reply #9 on: December 28, 2014, 04:24:15 PM »
I have no future
And whilst I love the present
It is passing now

maybe this is better:

I have no future
And whilst I love the present
It just passes by
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Re: Haiku Thread
« Reply #10 on: December 28, 2014, 06:24:45 PM »
Jumbojak is right
I think I like haiku now
Insert good line here
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Re: Haiku Thread
« Reply #11 on: December 29, 2014, 03:34:28 AM »
Insert a line why
One's thought belongs to them only
Your eye is your own
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Re: Haiku Thread
« Reply #12 on: December 29, 2014, 09:38:39 AM »
A good line, a rhyme
I'm not the creative type
When I broadcast thoughts
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Re: Haiku Thread
« Reply #13 on: December 29, 2014, 06:17:14 PM »
Edward II
Had a red-hot poker shoved
Up his you-know-where.
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Re: Haiku Thread
« Reply #14 on: December 29, 2014, 06:32:21 PM »
Some roses are red
Whereas violets are blue
I don't like flowers.
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